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PostSubject: Telma Reikatsu (Done, waiting for approval)   Telma Reikatsu (Done, waiting for approval) EmptySun Aug 15, 2010 6:17 pm

Basic Information

Name: Telma Reikatsu

Actual Age: 211 years old

Appeared Age: 19

Gender: Female

Division: 2nd Division

Rank: Lieutenant of the 2nd Division? ^^

Looks: Telma has just under shoulder-length spiked jet black hair. Her skin is a light peach color, which matches her rosy pink lips almost perfectly. On her right and left arms are dark inky black tattoos of flowers, presumably water lillies. Her shinigami attire is sleeveless and backless, ecept for the clean white cloth bandages the cover her back up unto her lower shoulder area. Telma's eyes are a dark sapphire blue, with long inky black lashes to compliment them. Telma wears the usual dark black and pure white shinigami ouutfit, yet her shinigami pants have been modified by her to let her move and shunpo more easily. When Telma isn't scowling or smiling, she has unusual babyish expression, as if she was just a small child with huge irrestible bright blue eyes. Telma unknowingly has this look, which is in sharp contrast with her strong tomboy attitude and personality. Her ears are tuiny, each lobe is pierced with normal blue skull symbol for shinigami. The sides of her pants have small cuts in them, and Telma doesn't really bother to get them fixed. She has an atheltic and tall build, her arms and legs somewhat beautifully toned. She weighs 126 pounds and stands 6'5", an unusually tall frame for a woman.

Personality: Telma Reikatsu is a tomboy and uses sarcasm. She plays any sport and hates girly items. Though Telma is extremly protective and honerable. She has a high honer code and follows it loyally. She often acts quite loud and laidback. She possesses incredible loyalty to her captain, unless it's someone she can get along with. Though the main reason she lacks loyalty is because she belies it's her choice on who she wants to align with and help, not her superiors. She is caring and only worries when those she cares about or trusts are in danger. She will go great lengths to recover them from whoever is holding them to danger. Her favorite color is silver.

She loves to listen to music and treasures any inventions. She also likes to eat. Telma is calm and steadfastly determined in battle. She hates to battle though. She will train to gain experience, though she hates battling for any other reasons besides saving and helping others. She possesses incredible stealth and dexterity. She doesn't make deals with those who are evil, unless they offer her something she needs greatly in order to save herself or another person. Back when she was in the 12th Division, she was often mistreated by those who didn't know of her status. Regardless, she treated all the people ranked lower then her pleasently. She didn't treat the others as pleasently, though she was respectful. Telma will lay her life down for her captain or others when the time comes for it.

She is now very happy and content. She follows the student headmaster quite loyally though, and is still willing to help anyone she prefers to or strike deals with those she wants to. She often teases her fellow students in a friendly way. She is often seen cooking and eating, or napping. She likes to play video games or mess around on the computer in her off time. She somewhat dislikes those who are too serious and uptight, as it goes against her views and ideas. She loves to paint and draw, as her robe was covered in patches,buttons, and paint marks. She is huge slacker and a major drinker. Telma has the unusual habit of adding the -sama suffix to the names of her superiors, the -kun suffix to her guy friends name, and the -chan suffix to her other friends name.

Sexuality: Bisexual.

Relationship Status: Single and is not looking.


Zanpakuto Information

Zanpakuto Name: Roiyadarei (Royal Legends)

Zanpakutou Spirits: Roiyaru takes the appearence of a young girl. Her hair is a dark blonde color and is kept in loose ponytails. She wears a multicolored, mostly pink, green, and cream colors, dress with a large pink butterfly icon on the bottom. She wears soft white knee high socks and light purple shoes. Her ears a pointed and have two large purple bell earrings. Her eyes are a violet color and underneath them are three colorful dots.Her lips are light pink and her skin is a lightly tanned peach. She carries with her a woven brown basket and a small pink parasol.In the basket are some little glass bottles. A beaded nacklace sits loose around her neck with a ladybag charm at the bottom. Namida is beautiful also. She has short dark blonde hair, with curls into a spiral at the edge of her hair. She wears a long creamy white colored dress with delicate aquamarine stitchs. Her dark brown pants extend down to her knees and a small golden pouch sits on her thigh strapped with a thin chain. Her skin is a light peach color and her lips are a darker and rosy peach color. Darei's eyes are a bright and stunning emerald green.

Roiyadarei

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Zanpakutou Realm: It is a giant frame of a past temple. Vines and undergrowth overtake the remaining pieces of the stone building. Trees grow all around. A broken staircase leading up to a mysterious circular door that is shining and still in perfect,untouched condition. Two doors lie on each side. In one rests a rusting gold and blue chest. The other is a dead end. In front of the mysterious circular door stands a guardian with strange markings over his body. Two more stand at the in front of a intresting symbol. Ahead of them is a slightly sloping staircase, untouched by vines and weeds. The staircase leads to a wide dome with a skeleton of a frame. In the center lies a small circular area with pillars around it. In it lies a stone bench with ancient inscriptions.


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Zanpakuto Looks: When Telma's zanpakutou is sealed, the hilt it a metallic silvery color. There is not threading or silk wrapped around it. The blade itself is silver in color, yet has a purple tint to it. It is incredibly durable, despite it's thin appearence. The guard is a crimson red in color, and resembles an inverted tear drop. Telma herself has remarked on more then one occassion that it somewhat signifies her zanpakutou's element, being the nature of poisen. The handle, instead of having threads, just have silver etched lines in it. The hilt has a onyx stone in it, with a uppercase R carved into it. Telma carries her zanpakutou across it's back, because if her picky preference and that it's length is incredibly long.

Shikai Description: Ability Name: Sutoraiku
Ability Description: If Ashei activates Sutoraiku, the tip of the blade sprouts ten vine-like ropes. The are made of reiatsu and each vine-rope has 50 long thornes on it. If one of the vines manage to embed thornes into the opponent, they will feel incredible pain. If she infuses her own Reiatsu with the target, then the thorns are able to increase in potency and power. If there is a strong fire attack, the vines could shrivel up and decay, then recede back into the sword. This will also cancel out the poisen if it happens. Though pain poisen lasts 3 posts, though the feeling gets weaker each post.
Ability Range: 15 meter radius of Ashei.
Ability Cooldown: 4 posts before she can use it again.

Ability Name: Kyougaku
Ability Description: If Telma activates Kyougaku, it allows her sword into the ground, while another replica sword appears in her hand. When she drops the sword, it'll slip into the ground as if it was slipping through water. Within seconds, 30 sharp and controllable blades rise unexpectedly from the ground, each one is loaded with a toxin that causes the brain to see things that aren't there. If she infuses her Reiatsu into this attack, she can choose to give them more power or add 5 more toxic blades. This lasts for 4 posts, except over each post the toxin will gradually get weaker, the last post being a faint illusion. There is no way to see past the first illusion which is in the first post, the second getting slightly fainter, the third being nearly over, and the fourth finally ending. Telma herself is immune to the toxin unless one of the blades accidently cuts her. Ice can weaken the attack moderatley by freezing the poisen ithe coats the blades.
Ability Range: 17 meters radius of Ashei.
Ability Cooldown: 4 posts before she can use it again.

Ability Name: Kantsuu
Ability Description: If activates Kantsuu, the blades glows dark red. The blades split in two, yet is still connected to the rest of the sword by a unbreakable wave or reiatsu. Telma can control the split blades and use it to her advantage. At the tip of the blades lies one extremely sharp pyramid shaped device that are embedded into the tip. If they pierce the skin, it will release a paralyzing chemical into the enemy. The paralyzing chemical lasts 3 posts. Any cold environment or thing will cause the chemical in the body to malfunction, and will lose it's effect completely.
Ability Range: 19 meters radius of Ashei.
Ability Cooldown: 5 posts before she can use this again.

Shikai Release Phrase: "Poisen the soul, Roiyadarei!"

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Bankai Information
This applies to captains and advanced lieutenants only.

Do you want your character to have bankai: Yes ^^

Bankai Description: Ability Name: Fukasha
Ability Description: If twirls both her left sword and her right sword quick enough to where they blur, she will activate Fukusha. In Fukusha, quick waves of bright red and sonic black shoot from each blurred sword. Theses waves are really highly pressurized mist which causes the victim to slowly drift to sleep, the first effect being drowsiness. If she infuses her Reiatsu, she can cause them to increase in power greatly. The red waves are outlined by strips of black for the right sword, and black waves are outlined with red for the left. This attack can be easily avoided with any form of ice or fire attacks. And even though it slowly causes the victim to fall asleep, drowsiness immidietly takes effect on Telma herself, weakening her own battle performance.
Ability Range: Within 30 meters of Telma.
Ability Cooldown: 4 posts before she can activate again.

Ability Name: Feiku-Akarui
Ability Description: If Telma is in the air, she is able to activate Feiku-Akarui. With Feiku-Araki, the ground that is within the range glows a neon red. From the tips of her wings, two red ribbons shoot done to the ground. Once they hit the ground they blend into it. If you are still on the ground, the ribbons will surround your arms and legs and deliver a strong toxin.This toxin causes your vision to become blurred, making Ashei nearly blurred to your sight. After it's done, the ground will glow dull red and stay there until she activates and ends Shoumei. The ribbons take a moderate amount of time to complete the design, so it's possible you can get off the ground before it surrounds you. This attack has no effect onn Telma.
Ability Range: 25 meters of Telma.
Ability Cooldown: 4 posts before she can use it again.

Ability Name: Shoumei
Ability Description: If Ashei has already activated and ended Feiku-Araki, she can activate Shoumei. In Shoumei, Telma will kneel down and place her left hand on the ground and stab the right sword into the ground. She will raise it back up from the ground while the marks seems to pulse a teal color instead of red. Telma will fly up and point the left sword at the gound. Within seconds, red beam will shoot down. 4 red ribbons will spilt from the circle the red beam left. The ribbons will make one huge design and once it's complete, four huge beams of poisen that will cause the target to become incredibly dizzy will shoot down from the sky and at the target from each cardinal direction: North, South, East, and West. The poisen is capable of throwing of the targets balance and stabilty. This attack can be fought off, though it requires a large amount of reiatsu to stablize vision and balance.This lasts 5 posts.
Ability Range: 30 meters within' Telma, same range as Feiku-Araki.
Ability Cooldown: 6 posts before she can use it again.

Ability Name: Seisatsu
Ability Description: If Nikki raises her swords and crashes them together in a diagonal fashion, she has activated Seisatsu. The very bottom of each sword becomes unattached yet is connected by a chain, and the base will grow incredibly sharp. Each time Telma hits you with the right swords base, a poisen capable of controlling two at maximum of your limbs will run through your body. If she hits you with the left swords base, it will drain your Reiatsu and heal herself, depending on how long the base has pierced you. If Ashei controls two limbs, it is possible for the second limb to break free, though the first cannot unless you use an ice or fire attack to destroy the pyramid on the base. Then that pyramid will lose it's power.This lasts 4 posts.
Ability Range: 30 meters within' Telma.
Ability Cooldown: 5 posts before she can use it again.


Bankai Looks: Telma gains quite an odd appearence in Bankai. She grows larger and brighter black wings, enabling her to fly. A dark black armor covers her too. Her eyes, both the scelera and pupil, glow bright yellow. She gains twin gold and black swords with no markings on them and a simple hilt.These swords are durable double-bladed katanas. Her armor covers every area, from her feet and up to her neck, leaving only her face uncovered. Her irises glow dark purple within her black and yellow eyes, while her lips are a sharp red.

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History and RP Sample

History: Telma Reikatsu was born in the Sainurei Province in Lower Japan. Her family was legendary and consisted of many great samurais. She was originally born Ayerei Tane. After spending a pleasent childhood with her mother, Denmai Tane, her father, Shoguuin Tane, and her older brother, Ryokou Tane, her village was invaded by the Senmou Warriors of another village. At the time, half of the villagers' samurai were in recovery from another exhausting battle. Only half were left to face the invaders. Among that half was Ryokou and Shoguuin.


Her mother and Ayerei were left to watch as they got brutally beaten by the Senmou Warriors. When they were beaten, the warriors murdered the inhabitants of the village, except for a few young teenage girls, Ayerei, and few strong men. Ayerie's mother was murdered also. They brought them in shackles to the huge village. Along the way, Ayerei fell and hit her head against a blunt rock. When she got back up, she had no memory of the entire situation. A few of the men notifyed her of what happened, though she hadn't remembered witnessing the events, and the men didn't even know her father that well, so she didn't possess any sadness over what had happened.


After they arrived at the village, Ayerei was named Telma. They didn't give her a last name, as she wasn't directly related to the Royal Family. They all treated her quite cruel, as Ashei was just to fill the spot of a dead maid who was killed by a spy. The name Ashei was actually more valuable itself. Ayerei was named after the great great grandmother of the current patriarch, Ensau Shinerami. And unlike the current family, Telma Shinerami was kinder and more respectful. The family disliked these aspects, so they named Ayerei after her. A few years after living there, Telma met a warrior about her age named Sarron Sarron. He was taken from another village, like Telma.


They were great and legendary friends. And until the 4th day of April, the day of her 17th birthday if she had still known, everything was going wonderful. But when nightfall arrived, Sarron and the other warriors were sent out to battle. Minutes before he left, he had told Telma her name, her past, and of her family members fate.Telma cried for hours. But when she finally had the strength to resume, she took a name. Ayerei Tane, after the proud family name she had been bestowed with. She stood up and smiled after drying her soaked tears. She breathed a couple ragged breaths before walking out of the door. The patriarch, Ensau Shinerami, stood there, glaring. His hands were sitting back, one was holding a knife, the other balled up into a fist.


He charged at her with his fist and knocked her out. Telma hadn't even seen it coming. After she was knocked out, he killed her quickly with the sharp knife. Sarron was locked in the other room the entire time with a knife that was identical to Ensua's knife. When a maid saw Telma's dead body and Sarron with a knife, she jumped to the wrong conclusion. But for Ensua, it was perfect. They executed him a few days after Telma had died. Telma was sitting there, her Spirit Chain already having been slightly eroded, when she saw Sarron. She ran up to him and smiled. All she got was a solemn look. She frowned. Sarron looked at her again and asked who she was.


Telma turned away and let a few tears slip. She glared at him. Suddenly, she discovered why he didn't remember anything. They had executed him through means of bashing his head on a stone, causing severe brain injury. She walked off and looked around. Suddenly, a man called out to her. He waved her forward and smiled. The man, Netairoul Sureiya, explained that he was a shinigami and that he would send her to the Soul Society. Telma nodded along, though completely confused. He told her kindly her kindly to close her eyes. Telma nodded, and was quite shocked when she was hit by the hilt.


She opened her eyes to yell, but found herself floating somewhere quite serene, yet strange. She hit the ground of the Soul Society, unaware of where she was. Telma wandered around, until she started to live with the Sanei family as a daughter. Nosaj, Natsui, Ayumika, and Dorinai were all in her family. Soon after, she departed to the Shinigami Academy,took up the name Telma Reikatsu, after people continously remarked that her Spirtual Pressure was high. She did extremely amazing in Kido, and still pretty great in swordsmanship. She trained at great lengths to develop an amazing shunpo too.


Telma learned Shikai one day in the Academy. After trying many times to learn her zanpaktou's name, it was finally needed when a real hollow broke loose. At the moment, there were only a few high level shinigami, and many students. Telma spoke frantically to her zanpakutou, asking for it's name as the hollow closed in on a few crying students. Two voices answered back and said Roiyadarei. Telma Reikatsu smiled with determination and yelled out her release as she jumped towards the hollow. She split it's mask clean down the middle and smiled. The students gasped and the older experienced shinigami's eyes widened.


Each day after that, Telma trained for Bankai. Even after graduating in only 3 years and being admitted as the 4th seat of the 12th Division, she still trained. After a while, she was accepted by others at the 12th Division as a 4th seat because of her unique poisen zanpakutou. Although by then, she was nearly surpassing her 3rd seat at fighting and kido. In the 12th Division, Telma would sit there and tinker with things and combine vial after vial of potion. She still trained and trained for her Bankai in order to finally become higher ranked at the 12th Division.


It finally happened 50 years after she had first started training for Bankai when she was battling a high ranked 3rd seat for fun and training. He was about to win, Telma was heavily injured. After pleading with her own zanpakutou, the spirits appeared. Roiya smiled happily at Telma, while Darei smiled in a caring manner. The 3rd seat gasped. Telma grinned at him and bombarded him with her newly discovered attacks after her spirits had disappeared. She made sure not sure kill him, although he was quite injured. Roiya congradulated her, while Darei smiled proudly at her.


Thirty years after staying at the 12th Division as aadvanced 3rd seat, she transferred over to the 2nd Division as a Lieutenant to Soifon. Telma, as the vice-captain of the 2nd Diivision, is also 2nd in command under Soifon at the Onmmitsukido, which is pretty normal since the Onmitsukido and the 2nd Division are linked directly. She continues to train, even though she has already acheived Bankai and Shikai. Telma very rarely shows mercy to any arrancar or espada, though she does contain some for those who have left those trecherous ranks.



RP Sample: Natsumi watched her kido fly towards Hakudoshi. Hopefully it hit him. And if it did, he was most likely beat. If it didn't....well, she would just keep fighting to she beat him. He was severly getting on her nerves, and she was just beginning to fight him! She watched the kido in anticipation. But she gasped as she saw what happened. It simply hit the ground and he was theire no longer! Damn, that was supposed to get him! Her eyes opened wide as she heard "Surprise!" being yelled from behind her. She whipped her body around to slash him with Tethisrenta. But he wasn't there anymore.Shit! She felt the small sharp blades that flew out of his zanpaktou hit her upper back.Hmmm, that was a nice surprise attack. The small blades are actually kinda cool.


The pain wasn't that bad though, just a large group of tiny cuts along the ridge of her upper back.But, it wasn't that great. Your gonna need something better to stop me. She spun around and repeated the attack strategy from before. To sonido clockwise and slash. But she made a few changes. Instead of simply going clockwise, she decided to go clockwise and counter-clockwise.This way, he couldn't get used to the same direction. And instead of using simple slashes, she used enforced intricately placed stabs. To name a few places, his lower back, his shoulders, his stomach, his knees, his feet (the achilles tendon,specifically), and his arms. She backed up a few feet and recited a kido.Natsumi pointed her tiny thin finger at Hakudoshi's heart and smiled. She wasn't gonna let him get away from her kidos' this time.


Hado 63. Raikoho! (Thunder Roar Cannon)
"Sprinkled on the bones of the beast! Sharp tower, red crystal, steel ring. Move and become the wind, stop and become calm. The sound of warring spears fills the empty castle!"


There...I doubt you can get away from that! I've hit you point blank! Escape my wrath, you silly brat! Natsumi yelled with a shockingly demented smile. She sonido'd away from him by a lengthy distance, and glanced at Natsumi. When she saw Hayami, Natsumi did a surprised double take.Hayami?! Are you ok?! Hayami!! Hayami was lying motionless in that pristine diamond enclosure thing that Hakudoshi had fired at her. She saw out of the corner of her eye will she was firing her second kido at Hakudoshi that Hayami had fired a Getsuga Tenshou at herself, and knew full well that she was attempting to enter Vasto Lorde. But...it looked like something had went wrong.


It looked like Hayami might have killed herself while trying to attain the higher state of power. You! Natsumi pointed at Hakudoshi with a evil glare in her eye.That, is your fault! Natsumi screamed as she pointed at Hayami's possibly dead body lying partially in the crystal enclosure and on the red ground of Mars.If YOU wouldn't of fired that pod-thingy at HER, she could be fighting! Now I don't know if she's alive or if she's dead, but she certainly looks closer to the former! Natsumi screamed at him, her eyes nearly bulging out of her sockets. She sonido'd over to him and rained stab after stab after stab down on him.In between stabs she cried out "You....stupid...idiotic..dumbass!".She finally sonido'd even farther back from the previous spot she was in before she went on her total rampage.


She knew that she had went a bit crazy, but he deserved every bit of those attacks. A tiny tiny tear slipped from her eye as she looked over to Hayami, then back to Hakudoshi.You idiot.







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PostSubject: Re: Telma Reikatsu (Done, waiting for approval)   Telma Reikatsu (Done, waiting for approval) EmptyMon Aug 16, 2010 5:11 pm

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Ability Name: Kyougaku
Ability Description: If Ashei activates Kyougaku, it allows her sword into the ground, while another replica sword appears in her hand. When she drops the sword, it'll slip into the ground as if it was slipping through water. Within seconds, 30 sharp and controllable blades rise unexpectedly from the ground, each one is loaded with a toxin that causes the brain to see things that aren't there. If she infuses her Reiatsu into this attack, she can choose to give them more power or add 5 more toxic blades. This lasts for 4 posts, except over each post the toxin will gradually get weaker, the last post being a faint illusion.
Ability Range: 17 meters radius of Ashei.
Ability Cooldown: 4 posts before she can use it again.

Is their any way the person can see through the Illusions? Does the posions have any effects on yourself? Also if you;yourself smell it will you be effected by the Toxins?


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Ability Name: Kantsuu
Ability Description: If activates Kantsuu, the blade glows dark red. The blade splits in two, yet is still connected to the rest of the sword by a unbreakable wave or reiatsu. Ashei can control the spike use it to her advantage. At the tip of the blade lies one extremely sharp pyramid shaped device that are embedded into the tip. If they pierce the skin, it will release a paralyzing chemical into the enemy. The paralyzing chemical lasts 3 posts. Any cold environment or thing will cause the chemical in the body to malfunction, and will lose it's effect completely.
Ability Range: 19 meters radius of Ashei.
Ability Cooldown: 5 posts before she can use this again.

So your Blade splits into 2, where did these spikes come from?
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PostSubject: Re: Telma Reikatsu (Done, waiting for approval)   Telma Reikatsu (Done, waiting for approval) EmptyMon Aug 16, 2010 5:56 pm

Fixed. Can I add Bankai now? Sarah said I could be an advanced lt.
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PostSubject: Re: Telma Reikatsu (Done, waiting for approval)   Telma Reikatsu (Done, waiting for approval) EmptyTue Aug 17, 2010 10:52 am

Yes you can add bankai now.
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PostSubject: Re: Telma Reikatsu (Done, waiting for approval)   Telma Reikatsu (Done, waiting for approval) EmptyWed Aug 18, 2010 5:04 am

Okay added :3
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PostSubject: Re: Telma Reikatsu (Done, waiting for approval)   Telma Reikatsu (Done, waiting for approval) EmptyWed Aug 18, 2010 5:53 am

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Ability Name: Fukasha
Ability Description: If twirls both her left sword and her right sword quick enough to where they blur, she will activate Fukusha. In Fukusha, quick waves of bright red and sonic black shoot from each blurred sword. Theses waves are really highly pressurized mist which causes the victim to slowly drift to sleep, the first effect being drowsiness. If she infuses her Reiatsu, she can cause them to increase in power greatly. The red waves are outlined by strips of black for the right sword, and black waves are outlined with red for the left. This attack can be easily avoided with any form of ice or fire attacks. And even though it slowly causes the victim to fall asleep, drowsiness immidietly takes effect on Telma herself, weakening her own battle performance.
Ability Range: Within 30 meters of Telma.
Ability Cooldown: 4 posts before she can activate again.

How can it be avoided? You said with Ice and fire. What do you mean by Ice a fire, a wave about the same size as yours?

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Ability Name: Feiku-Akarui
Ability Description: If Telma is in the air, she is able to activate Feiku-Akarui. With Feiku-Araki, the ground that is within the range glows a neon red. From the tips of her wings, two red ribbons shoot done to the ground. Once they hit the ground they blend into it. If you are still on the ground, the ribbons will surround your arms and legs and deliver a strong toxin.This toxin causes your vision to become blurred, making Ashei nearly blurred to your sight. After it's done, the ground will glow dull red and stay there until she activates and ends Shoumei. The ribbons take a moderate amount of time to complete the design, so it's possible you can get off the ground before it surrounds you. This attack has no effect onn Telma.
Ability Range: 25 meters of Telma.
Ability Cooldown: 4 posts before she can use it again.

Can these ribbons be cut before you they reach for someones arms?

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Ability Name: Shoumei
Ability Description: If Ashei has already activated and ended Feiku-Araki, she can activate Shoumei. In Shoumei, Telma will kneel down and place her left hand on the ground and stab the right sword into the ground. She will raise it back up from the ground while the marks seems to pulse a teal color instead of red. Telma will fly up and point the left sword at the gound. Within seconds, red beam will shoot down. 4 red ribbons will spilt from the circle the red beam left. The ribbons will make one huge design and once it's complete, four huge beams of poisen that will cause the target to become incredibly dizzy will shoot down from the sky and at the target from each cardinal direction: North, South, East, and West. The poisen is capable of throwing of the targets balance and stabilty. This attack can be fought off, though it requires a large amount of reiatsu to stablize vision and balance.This lasts 5 posts.
Ability Range: 30 meters within' Telma, same range as Feiku-Araki.
Ability Cooldown: 6 posts before she can use it again.

Is their any other way to fight it off? Also how high can these ribbons go?

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Ability Name: Seisatsu
Ability Description: If Nikki raises her swords and crashes them together in a diagonal fashion, she has activated Seisatsu. The very bottom of each sword becomes unattached yet is connected by a chain, and the base will grow incredibly sharp. Each time Telma hits you with the right swords base, a poisen capable of controlling two at maximum of your limbs will run through your body. If she hits you with the left swords base, it will drain your Reiatsu and heal herself, depending on how long the base has pierced you. If Ashei controls two limbs, it is possible for the second limb to break free, though the first cannot unless you use an ice or fire attack to destroy the pyramid on the base. Then that pyramid will lose it's power.This lasts 4 posts.
Ability Range: 30 meters within' Telma.
Ability Cooldown: 5 posts before she can use it again.

If you can give this a lower duration and what do you mean by 30 meters?
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PostSubject: Re: Telma Reikatsu (Done, waiting for approval)   Telma Reikatsu (Done, waiting for approval) EmptyWed Aug 18, 2010 6:47 am

Questions 1 and 2. Yes, with a blast of ice or fire about the same size of that attack. It doesn't have to be extremely powerful, maybe just moderately powerful. As for avoiding it, I guess there would be somewhat. Depending on where you are, there is moderate distance between each sword's wave, so if your in the middle, you'd avoid it. But you could just shunpo or sonido or use whatever speed ability to move, though you'd have to be advanced with it.

Question 2. Yes, they can. Even though the ribbons blend into the ground, you can still see the faint outline of ribbons. You'd just have to be alert to see it and cut it. And if you cut one of the ribbons, the other will still take effect if you don't cut it. Just with less power then with both.

Questions 3 and 4. Yes, there is, though it's a more rare way. Unlike the others, Lightning type attacks could intercept the ribbons. And for the height question, it depends on Telma's location. Though she usually can't fly extremely extremely far up. So it wouldn't be like as high as the clouds.

Questions 5 and 6. Sure, I don't mind giving it a lower duration. Is two posts okay, and she can use it again in 4 posts? And about the 30 meters question, it kind means Telma can only swing the chains 30 meters away from where she's standing or flying. It can't go any further.
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Looks good. ^^ I'm also playing as Soifon, so you'll be my Lieutenant. =) Approved.
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